smartphone
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I don't use smartphone.
but I want use smartphone at once.
but once an average of smartphones in use will not be available,because I have sense of what it means to be addicte to.
I thick I will don't use smartphones
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Alice!
It\'s good that you know your limitations. Using smartphones can be beneficial at times. But if you\'re easily addicted to it and it affects your
studies, it [이름]ld be better not to have it for now. Anyway, you\'ll definitely be able to have one as you get older. :)
Thanks for your composition. I\'ll see you later.
Teacher Lexi
I don\'t use smartphone.
>>Correct
>>OR: I\'m not using smartphone.but I want use smartphone at once.>>But I want to use smartphone at times.
OR>>But I want to use smartphone one time.
but once an average of smartphones in use will not be available,because I have sense of what it means to be addicte to.>>But once is not enough because I have the tendecy to be addicted to it.
>>OR: But one time [이름]ldn\'t suffice because I get addicted pretty easily.
I thick I will don\'t use smartphones
>>I think I won\'t use smartphone for now.
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