Smartphone was out.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Maybe you forgot your limitation in using your phone that\'s why your mom took it.
I understand your mom.
You should study first before playing games.
Show your mom that you are a good son and a good student. ^^
Have a great weekend! Good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Smartphone was out yesterday.
>> My smartphone was taken by my mom yesterday.
Because I played smartphonegames many times.
>> It\'s because I played smartphone games a lot.
Suddenly,my mother took out my smartphone on Tuesday.
>> Then suddenly, my mom took my phone on Tuesday.
When I study at advertisement lecture.I can have a smartphone when I go to school.
>> I can have my smartphone back when I go to school or study at the advertising lecture.
Oh,my.
>> Oh, my!
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