smile
학생이 쓴 원문
many people want to be a happy person on thier own. of cource so do i
so smiling is a good way to be happy
i find this is very important!! so i try to smile anywhere anytime
especailly i alway try to smile brightly whenever i meet persons such as family, friends and coworkers
i rarely treat them without a smile
you know, it help me feel happy and maintain good relationship
to be honest, there is a saying in korea folktales.
\"if you smile, you\'ll be blessed\" i absolutely agree!!
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름] Woo!
I absolutely agree with the Korean saying \"If you laugh, you\'ll be blessed\" too.
Everyone has their own problems, but we should never forget to laugh and smile.
many people want to be a happy person on thier own.
>>Many people want to be happy on their own.
of cource so do i
>>Of course I do, too.
so smiling is a good way to be happy
>>So a smile is a good way to be happy.
i find this is very important!!
>>I think this is very important!
so i try to smile anywhere anytime
>>So I try to laugh anytime, anywhere.
especailly i alway try to smile brightly whenever i meet persons such as family, friends and coworkers
>>Especially, I try to smile brightly whenever I meet people like my family, friends, and co-workers.
i rarely treat them without a smile
>>I rarely treat them without a smile.
you know, it help me feel happy and maintain good relationship
>>You know, it helps me stay happy and have a good relationship.
to be honest, there is a saying in korea folktales.
>>To be honest, there is a saying in Korean folklore.
\"if you smile, you\'ll be blessed\" i absolutely agree!!
>>\"If you laugh, you\'ll be blessed.\" I totally agree!
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