Smoke
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I think smoke is not able to disappear.There are many people who feel stressed in working.The simple way to feel calm is smoke .So,i think it is impossible.
강사 첨삭
Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I think smoke is not able to disappear.
>>> I think smoking will never disappear.
There are many people who feel stressed in working.
>>> There are many people who feel stressed about work.
The simple way to feel calm is smoke .
>>> The simple way to feel calm is to smoke.
So,i think it is impossible.
>>> So, I think it is impossible.
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