snack day

2015-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Yesterday was snack day.I ate a lot of stick snack.It tastes good and it is a chocolate stick.I like it.Yesterday was November 11th.It stand stick chocolateday.My friends and I ate a lot of chocolate stick.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ^^,How are you today? Hope you\'re doing great.You\'re sentences we\'re good. Most of them are correct. Just don\'t forget to put on the correct article for the sentence.Other than that, you did great on your homework.I hope you enjoyed your chocolate stick day.^^,Always take care. See you on our next class.~~Teacher Kris ^^, Yesterday was snack day.>> Yesterday was a snack day.I ate a lot of stick snack.>> I ate a lot of chocolate stick snacks.It tastes good and it is a chocolate stick.>> CORRECTOR: The chocolate stick tastes so good.I like it.>> CORRECTOR: I love it.Yesterday was November 11th.>> CORRECTIt stand stick chocolateday.>> It\'s chocolate stick day. My friends and I ate a lot of chocolate stick.>>CORRECT

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