Snacks!!
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Yes. I think I can avoid snacking for a month. Because actually, when I lost 10kg, I avoided snacking for two months. At that time, I felt uncomfortable because I couldn\'t eat snacks, but it wasn\'t bad because I felt like I was losing weight and getting healthier.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. I think I can avoid snacking for a month.
>>> CORRECT!
Because actually, when I lost 10kg, I avoided snacking for two months.
>>> CORRECT!
At that time, I felt uncomfortable because I couldn\'t eat snacks, but it wasn\'t bad because I felt like I was losing weight and getting healthier.
>>> CORRECT!
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