Snacks I can\'t resist
학생이 쓴 원문
When I order coffee in a coffee shop, it is hard for me to skip some cakes. I don\'t usually like to have cakes, but when at a coffee shop, I always order some. Especially I enjoy a carrot cake, chocolate mousse cake, or tiramisu cake. With it, drinking a cup of coffee or tea makes me happy 😊
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I can really see that you find cakes irresistible at cafes. It\'s funny that you try to avoid caffeine but still enjoy it, which even makes you crave cakes.
- T. Caitlyn
When I order coffee in a coffee shop, it is hard for me to skip some cakes.
>> When I order coffee in a coffee shop, it is hard for me to resist ordering some cakes.
I don\'t usually like to have cakes, but when at a coffee shop, I always order some.
>> CORRECT
Especially I enjoy a carrot cake, chocolate mousse cake, or tiramisu cake.
>> Especially, I enjoy carrot cake, chocolate mousse cake, or tiramisu cake.
With it, drinking a cup of coffee or tea makes me happy
>> CORRECT
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