Snow
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1. Are there any specific activities or traditions in korea that you enjoy during the snowy season?
- When it snows, many Koreans go skiing or snowboarding at ski resorts.
Also, people clean up the snow in front of the house and make a big snowman with the children.
People can meet a various snowmen in front of their house.
Among the myth of Korea, there is a myth taht first love will come true if the snowman you made does not melt by spring.
2. Do you have a favorite winter food or drink in Korea that you look forward to when it\'s snowing?
- It\'s not a food you eat when it snows, but there is a representative winter food you eat when it gets cold.
It\'s called \"bungeo-ppang\", which is a food that is baked crispy with red bean or custard cream is a fish-shaped bread.
It\'s very delicious you blow crispy bread when it\'s cold.
강사 첨삭
Early morning, [이름]! Thanks for sharing some of the things Koreans do and eat during the winter season. Your descriptions of Korean winter and \"bungeo-ppang\" give a vivid glimpse into Korean culture. Have you done all of these things? I want to know during our class today. See you!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: 1. Are there any specific activities or traditions in Korea that you enjoy during the snowy season?
When it snows, many Koreans go skiing or snowboarding at ski resorts.
>> Correct
Also, people clean up the snow in front of the house and make a big snowman with the children.
>> Correct
People can meet a various snowmen in front of their house.
People can meet a various snowmen in front of their house.
>> People can meet various snowmen in front of their houses.
Among the myth of Korea, there is a myth taht first love will come true if the snowman you made does not melt by spring.
Among the myth of Korea, there is a myth taht first love will come true if the snowman you made does not melt by spring.
>> Among the myths of Korea, there is a belief that first love will come true if the snowman you made does not melt by spring.
2. Do you have a favorite winter food or drink in Korea that you look forward to when it\'s snowing?
It\'s not a food you eat when it snows, but there is a representative winter food you eat when it gets cold.
>> Correct
It\'s called \"bungeo-ppang\", which is a food that is baked crispy with red bean or custard cream is a fish-shaped bread.
It\'s called \"bungeo-ppang\", which is a food that is baked crispy with red bean or custard cream is a fish-shaped bread.
>> It\'s called \"bungeo-ppang,\" which is a fish-shaped bread baked crispy with red bean or custard cream.
It\'s very delicious you blow crispy bread when it\'s cold.
It\'s very delicious you blow crispy bread when it\'s cold.
>> It\'s very delicious to enjoy crispy bread when it\'s cold.
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