SNOW
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The first movie I saw in the movie theater with my children was FROZEN.
Maybe that\'s why children love snow so much.
But I\'m worried about going to work the next day when it snows.
It doesn\'t seem to snow much these days because of climate change.
I plan to live in Indonesia for the next five years.
I think I can\'t see a snowy winter for a while.
강사 첨삭
Hi Soomi!^^
Maybe that\'s why children love snow so much.
But I\'m worried about going to work the next day when it snows.
It doesn\'t seem to snow much these days because of climate change.
I have never seen a snow in real life.
It looks magical on the screen.
I know it\'s cold but I cannot imagine how cold would it be.
Andrea
The first movie I saw in the movie theater with my children was FROZEN.
>> Correct
Maybe that\'s why children love snow so much.
>> Correct
But I\'m worried about going to work the next day when it snows.
>> Correct
It doesn\'t seem to snow much these days because of climate change.
>> It doesn\'t seem to snow much these days because of the climate change.
I plan to live in Indonesia for the next five years.
>> I plan to live in Indonesia in the next five years.
>> I plan to live in Indonesia in the next five years.
I think I can\'t see a snowy winter for a while.
>> Correct
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