snow snow snow!!

Today, I played in the snow with my younger sister. Now, it is not school day so, it was hard for me to meet my friends. I didn't know that it snowed yesterday. My younger sister told me. We made a snowman. We tried to make that snowman handsome but, it became sily. The eye was not right. One was to high and one was to low. After making a snowman we had a snowfight. My sister said " stop !! " Then she attacked me, It was a funny scene. However, I won the snowfight. Yepee I hope it would snow tommorow.

Hello Joey, It sounds nice you have a lot of time to play in the snow and spend with your sister. Let me know if you play again tomorrow. -RJ-  Today, I played in the snow with my younger sister.  >>correctNow, it is not school day so, it was hard for me to meet my friends.  >>I don't have school nowadays, so it's hard for me to meet my friends.I didn't know that it snowed yesterday. My younger sister told me.  >>correctWe made a snowman. We tried to make that snowman handsome but, it became sily.  >>We made a snowman. We tried to make that snowman handsome, but it became silly.  The eye was not right. One was to high and one was to low.  >>The eyes were not right. One was too high and the other was too low. After making a snowman we had a snowfight. My sister said " stop !! ">>correctThen she attacked me, It was a funny scene. However, I won the snowfight. Yepee>>correctI hope it would snow tommorow. >>correct