Snow White
학생이 쓴 원문
Once upon a time the princess name is a Snow White,also she is kind and nice.
One day her mother died that time father remarried with witch . She is a ugly and bad person.
She has a magic mirrow that mirrow can do anything.One day she asked the mirrow ,who is the prettiest person that mirrow said the Snow White.She was jealous and then she told a hunter.
Hunter was a nice person that He didn’t killed her only threw far away. Show white found a small house that house is the dwarves’s home. She lived with 7 dwarves .One day witch made poison apple then was selling for Snow White. She ate immediately she fell a sleep.
By the time prince was passing by the her,he woke her up right away came out apple from her mouse. Prince married her they lived happy life forever.
1. My favorite place(to)walk is park across the street.
2. The wooden bridge (over) the muddy creek was built last year.
3. Those trees (beside) the lake are willows.
4. The tall evergreen trees(behind) the playground
강사 첨삭
A prepositional phrase is a group of words beginning with a preposition and ending with a
noun or pronoun.
Example: The little boy in the red jacket is my brother, Henry.
\"In the red jacket\" is the prepositional phrase. \"In\" is the
preposition, and \"jacket\" is the object.
- Teacher Debbie
>> Once upon a tme, there was a very kind princess named Snow White.
One day her mother died that time father remarried with witch .
One day her mother died that time father remarried with witch .
>> One day, her mother died. Then her father unknowingly married a witch.
She is a ugly and bad person.
>> She is an ugly and bad person.
She has a magic mirrow that mirrow can do anything.
She has a magic mirrow that mirrow can do anything.
>> She has a magic mirror that can do anything.
One day she asked the mirrow ,who is the prettiest person that mirrow said the Snow White.
>> One day, she asked the mirror who s he prettiest of them all. The mirror said it\'s Snow White.
She was jealous and then she told a hunter.
>> She got jealous so she hired a hunter.
Hunter was a nice person that He didn’t killed her only threw far away.
Hunter was a nice person that He didn’t killed her only threw far away.
>> The hunter was actually a nice person that he didn\'t kill Snow White.
>> He just threw her somewhere far away.
Show white found a small house that house is the dwarves’s home.
>> Snow White then found a house that is resided by dwarves.
She lived with 7 dwarves.
>> correct
One day witch made poison apple then was selling for Snow White.
>> One day, the witch sold a poisonous apple to Snow White.
She ate immediately she fell a sleep.
>> She ate it and immediately fell asleep.
By the time prince was passing by the her,he woke her up right away came out apple from her mouse.
By the time prince was passing by the her,he woke her up right away came out apple from her mouse.
>> by the time the prince was passing by, he woke her up right away.
Prince married her they lived happy life forever.
1. My favorite place(to)walk is park across the street.
>> The prince married her and they lived happily ever after.
For this part, the instruction was to select the \"prepositional phrase\" so it should not be just one word, but a phrase.
1. My favorite place(to)walk is park across the street.
>> across the street
2. The wooden bridge (over) the muddy creek was built last year.
2. The wooden bridge (over) the muddy creek was built last year.
>> over the muddy creek
3. Those trees (beside) the lake are willows.
3. Those trees (beside) the lake are willows.
>> beside the lake
4. The tall evergreen trees(behind) the playground
4. The tall evergreen trees(behind) the playground
>> behind the playground
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