Snowboarding

I went snowboarding to Gonjiam resort I went yesterday so there weren't many people. People almost go there at weekends. I snowboarded about 2 hours. There were no people so I road too much so I almost fell to the ground. So tiring. I've learned snowboarding only for a day. Only 2 hours by my father's co-worker. I don't know if I am good at snowboarding but I'm now good at snowboarding. Yepee!

Hi there! It’s good to know you had a great time snowboarding. Anyway, I have included here the correction of your composition for your further improvement. Take care! -T. RJ   I went snowboarding to Gonjiam resort >> I went snowboarding at Gonjiam resort. I went yesterday so there weren't many people. >> I went yesterday, so there weren’t many people. People almost go there at weekends. >> People usually go there on weekends.I snowboarded about 2 hours. >> Correct. There were no people so I road too much so I almost fell to the ground. >> There were no people, so I boarded too much that I almost fell on the ground. So tiring. >> It was so tiring.I've learned snowboarding only for a day. >> Correct. Only 2 hours by my father's co-worker. >> And my father’s co-worker learned it for only 2 hours. I don't know if I am good at snowboarding but I'm now good at snowboarding. Yepee! >> I don’t know if I am good at it but, at least now, I already know how to do it. Yipee!