SNS
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강사 첨삭
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In the past, it was take to time for general person to access information.
>>In the past, it took a lot of time for the average person to access information.
Only few experts and journalists monopolie information and advanced knowledge.
>>Only a few experts and journalists monopolized information and advanced knowledge.
But nowdays everyone can get information easy and fast if we want to konw, even fake news.
>>But nowadays, everyone can easily and quickly obtain information if they wish, including fake news.
Many adults like me are worry about SNS curture of teen ages and young generations.
>>Many adults, like me, are worried about the social media culture among teenagers and young generations.
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