so cold

2011-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Thesedays, the weather is so cold!! In 2011/01/16, Seoul's temperature was lower than Moscow! Can you believe it! The reason was, the anticyclone located in the North Pole has weaken so the Jet Stream had weaken too. Then, the cold wind had come down and the warm wind had gone up. Also, Korea was the center of the part where the cold wind comes directly. It was bone-chilly cold really,,, If you went out You might know that it was very cold. More than Moscow!

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Hello Joey, Wow, that's not good news. No wonder most of my students stayed home on the weekend when I asked them about what they did on the weekend. It's a good thing the place I'm staying now isn;t that cold. If that's the case, could it be possible that it will be colder in Seoul in February? Talk to you later. -RJ Thesedays, the weather is so cold!!>>correctIn 2011/01/16, Seoul's temperature was lower than Moscow! Can you believe it!>>correctThe reason was, the anticyclone located in the North Pole has weaken so the Jet Stream had weaken too. >>correctThen, the cold wind had come down and the warm wind had gone up. Also, Korea was the center of the part where the cold wind comes directly.>>Then, the cold wind had come down while the warm wind had gone up. Also, Korea was the center where the cold wind enters.It was bone-chilly cold really,,, If you went out You might know that it was very cold. More than Moscow! >> It was bone-chilly cold really,,, If you went out you might have known how cold it really was. More than Moscow!

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