so sad

2013-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello teacher!! Already we will have class only one. Wow@@ I am so sad...But i will continue study english at power english. But i not will meet teacher? This is very difficult. I wrote that i boring everyday. But today is not boring. Ha ha now think.. my english skill i not ascend... I will hard study ahead. Tomorrow ... tuesday.. oh no.. tuesday is not going time very slowly. Oh.. i want write more story. But i do not konw that i will write this letter. So sad. Then tomorrow is tuseday so i will go to bad. Good night teacher~~ we will speak tomorrow~@

강사 첨삭

Good evening again [이름]!! Thank you for your message. I hope that I can still meet you again after our class period. Always continue to study hard. I know you can do it! Just focus on the things that you need to improve. Please review the corrections I made for you below. See you tomorrow! Good night!! ~ T. Giselle :)   Hello teacher!! >> Correct! Already we will have class only one. >> We only have one class left. Wow@@ I am so sad... >> Correct! But i will continue study english at power english. >> But I will continue to study at PowerEnglish. But i not will meet teacher? >> Will I still meet you, teacher? This is very difficult. >> Correct! I wrote that i boring everyday. >> I feel bored writing everyday. But today is not boring. >> Correct!Ha ha now think.. my english skill i not ascend... >> Ha ha, now I think my English skills didn\'t improve. I will hard study ahead. >> I will study harder.Tomorrow ... tuesday.. oh no.. >> Tomorrow will be Tuesday. Oh no! tuesday is not going time very slowly. >> I hope that time tomorrow will move very slowly. Oh.. i want write more story. >> Oh.. I want to write more stories. But i do not konw that i will write this letter. >> But I do not know what else to write in this letter. So sad. >> It is so sad. Then tomorrow is tuseday so i will go to bad. >> Then tomorrow will be worse. Good night teacher~~ >> Correct! we will speak tomorrow~@ >> We will talk again tomorrow. ~@

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