so thougthful of you
학생이 쓴 원문
It was so considerate and meaningful to me that you wanted to establish a store or company for my parents. what a the sweetest daughter you are.
the regarding of my homework.
The biggest advantage of being an
entrepreneur is freedom to create and control your own path.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Charlie^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, it\'s my dream for my parents.
It\'s because I want them to easily take a day off when they are sick or when they can\'t go to work.
_T. SHAY^^
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The biggest advantage of being an entrepreneur is freedom to create and control your own path.
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, it\'s my dream for my parents.
It\'s because I want them to easily take a day off when they are sick or when they can\'t go to work.
_T. SHAY^^
***
The biggest advantage of being an entrepreneur is freedom to create and control your own path.
>>The biggest advantage of being an entrepreneur is the freedom to create and control your own path.
OR: The best thing about being an entrepreneur is having the freedom to shape your own path.
OR: The best thing about being an entrepreneur is having the freedom to shape your own path.
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