soccer
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We played soccer with Turkey.
0:0.....
I excepted that Korea will win but, it was a draw.
Turkey's supervisor is Hiddink.
I think we lost because there was no Park-jisung, Lee-Young pyo and Lee-chongyong and Cha Duri had bad condition.
NExt time, we can beat Turkey by 3:1.!!
Nice Korea!
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey,
Sorry to hear that, I guess there's always a next time. Talk to you tomorrow.
-RJ
We played soccer with Turkey.0:0.....
>>We had a soccer match with Turkey
I excepted that Korea will win but, it was a draw.
>>I excepted Korea to win but it was a draw.
Turkey's supervisor is Hiddink.
>>Turkey's coach is Hiddink.
I think we lost because there was no Park-jisung, Lee-Young pyo and Lee-chongyong and Cha Duri had bad condition.
>>I think we lost because Park-jisung and Lee-Young pyo were out, and Lee-chongyong and Cha Duri were injured.
NExt time, we can beat Turkey by 3:1.!!
>>correct
Nice Korea!
>>correct
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