soccer

2011-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jasmin

학생이 쓴 원문

Today we have soccer game to another class. I think we are team is the best in 2grade!! but it is just my think. we are them lose 1:2 ..... but I am not a sad.. so we will win the game next week.!!^^

강사 첨삭

Hey [이름], That's the spirit! Keep it up! Never give up! Today we have soccer game to another class. >>Today, we had a soccer game with another class.I think we are team is the best in 2grade!! >>I think our team is the best in 2nd grade!but it is just my think. >>But it is just my opinion.we are them lose 1:2 ..... >>We lost by a score of 1:2.but I am not a sad.. >>CORRECT Jso we will win the game next week.!!^^ >>CORRECT J  

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