soccer
학생이 쓴 원문
Today we have soccer game to another class.
I think we are team is the best in 2grade!!
but it is just my think.
we are them lose 1:2 .....
but I am not a sad..
so we will win the game next week.!!^^
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름],
That's the spirit! Keep it up! Never give up!
Today we have soccer game to another class.
>>Today, we had a soccer game with another class.I think we are team is the best in 2grade!!
>>I think our team is the best in 2nd grade!but it is just my think.
>>But it is just my opinion.we are them lose 1:2 .....
>>We lost by a score of 1:2.but I am not a sad..
>>CORRECT Jso we will win the game next week.!!^^
>>CORRECT J
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