soccer versus korea and Japan

2011-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

학생이 쓴 원문

Unfortunately, Korea had lost the soccer game versus Japan. We first scored by shooting a penalty kick. Gi seong Yong had scored. However at the 36th minute Japan scored. So it went to extension. Japan shoot a penalty kick and korea's goal keeper blocked it. However they shot the ball again and they scored. Fortunately, Hwang Jung eun scored again so we did the last penalty kicks. However we didn't scored not even one!! and Japan scored all so we lost. We will have a match with Uzbekistan and Japan will have a last game with Australia.

강사 첨삭

Hello Joey,

That's too bad. I'm sure a lot of Korean fans were disappointed as well. But, that's soccer. It's a sport, you win some and you lose some. Talk to you again tomorrow.

-RJ

Unfortunately, Korea had lost the soccer game versus Japan.

>>Unfortunately, Korea lost the soccer game versus Japan.
We first scored by shooting a penalty kick. Gi seong Yong had scored.

>>correct
However at the 36th minute Japan scored.

>>correct
So it went to extension.

>>So it went to overtime.
Japan shoot a penalty kick and korea's goal keeper blocked it.

>>Japan shot a penalty kick and Korea's goal keeper blocked it.
However they shot the ball again and they scored. Fortunately, Hwang Jung eun scored again so we did the last penalty kicks.

>>However they shot the ball again and they scored. Fortunately, Hwang Jung eun scored again so scored the last penalty kicks.
However we didn't scored not even one!! and Japan scored all so we lost.

>>correct
We will have a match with Uzbekistan and Japan will have a last game with Australia.

>>correct

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