Soccer with Uzbekistan

2011-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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We have a soccer game with Uzbekistan today at midnight. Uzbekistan's FIFA ranking is 108th and Korea's FIFA ranking is 39th. So we can beat them easily. We had 7 games with them and Korea won 5 games lost 1 game and draw 1 game. We have a better score butm Uzbekistan still has a great offending ability. They have a good ability to score. Still I think we can win because Austrailia had won them 6:0 so I think we can win by 2:1 or 2:0 because there is no Park Ji sung because he has water in his knee still we can win@@ What score do you predict? Talk to you later.

강사 첨삭

Hi Joey!
Hmmm... I'm not really familiar with the soccer teams, but I do know that Korea
has a really talented soccer squad. If Uzbekistan beats Korea, it would be a shocker. See you later.
-RJ
We have a soccer game with Uzbekistan today at midnight.

>>correct
Uzbekistan's FIFA ranking is 108th and Korea's FIFA ranking is 39th.

>>Uzbekistan's FIFA ranking is 108th and Korea's 39th.
So we can beat them easily.

>>correct
We had 7 games with them and Korea won 5 games lost 1 game and draw 1 game.

>>We had 7 games with them and Korea won 5 games, lost 1 game, and 1 game was a draw.
We have a better score butm Uzbekistan still has a great offending ability. They have a good ability to score.

>>We have a better score but Uzbekistan still has great offense. They have a good ability to score.

Still I think we can win because Austrailia had won them 6:0 so I think we can win by 2:1 or 2:0 because there is no Park Ji sung because he has water in his knee still we can win@@

>>Still I think we can win because Australia beat them 6:0 so I think we can win by 2:1 or 2:0 because Park Ji sung is out. He has water in his knee, but still we can win.
What score do you predict? Talk to you later.

>>correct

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