Social media.
학생이 쓴 원문
Social media has pros and cons which could be amplified in either way according to the one\'s using pattern. If individuals are considerate enough to take the advantage of it while avoiding all the possibilities of misuse, they should be encouraged to utilize social media as they want. However, unfortunately, that doesn\'t seem to be true in many cases. For example, a number of users habitually log on to a kind of social media they prefer the most, which could lead to the addiction. They tend to lose their track of time when they are indulging in what others have uploaded on social networking platforms even if there are not many intriguing stories or eye-catching posts. If this develops further, they easily become anxious when they are not able to access wi-fi networks or to use smartphones, not to mention they are constantly exposed to a tremendous amount of misinformation when they have an access to social media. In this respect, we should at least limit the time spent on using it.
강사 첨삭
Very nice Drexel! You made a very good point here. It\'s not a matter of quitting but limiting the use of it. On the contrary, if something is addictive, isn\'t it better to just quit it? ^ ^ Social media platforms in reality are designed to be addictive. It\'s like their sole intention and purpose. \"Fragmented attention\" is another issue and we can almost see it amongst the young generation these days. And because of false norms in the society and magnified with the posts seen on these platforms, people are inclined to feel inadequate and make comparisons with others. ^^
-Teacher Jedah
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If individuals are considerate enough to take the advantage of it while avoiding all the possibilities of misuse, they should be encouraged to utilize social media as they want.
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However, unfortunately, that doesn\'t seem to be true in many cases.
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For example, a number of users habitually log on to a kind of social media they prefer the most, which could lead to the addiction.
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They tend to lose their track of time when they are indulging in what others have uploaded on social networking platforms even if there are not many intriguing stories or eye-catching posts.
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If this develops further, they easily become anxious when they are not able to access wi-fi networks or to use smartphones, not to mention they are constantly exposed to a tremendous amount of misinformation when they have an access to social media.
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In this respect, we should at least limit the time spent on using it.
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