Social media has its disadvantages.
학생이 쓴 원문
What I dislike about social media is that it often creates pressure by showing only the best parts of people\'s lives.
This leads to unnecessary comparision and stress.
It can also be very addictive, making me waste time instead of focusing on more meaningful activities like reading, exercising, or spending time with loved ones.
While it connects people on line, it sometimes weakens face to face relationships.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I totally agree with you. Social media has benefits, but the pressure and time-wasting can be really harmful. Finding balance is important.
-T. Sonny
What I dislike about social media is that it often creates pressure by showing only the best parts of people\'s lives.
>>Correct!
This leads to unnecessary comparision and stress.
This leads to unnecessary comparision and stress.
>>This leads to unnecessary comparison and stress.
It can also be very addictive, making me waste time instead of focusing on more meaningful activities like reading, exercising, or spending time with loved ones.
It can also be very addictive, making me waste time instead of focusing on more meaningful activities like reading, exercising, or spending time with loved ones.
>>Correct!
While it connects people on line, it sometimes weakens face to face relationships.
While it connects people on line, it sometimes weakens face to face relationships.
>>While it connects people online, it sometimes weakens face-to-face relationships.
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