Social networking can make someone faster and easier to communicate with others.

2019-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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I like to use phone to talk someone. I also use phone to watch messages. Social networking is more work well in the phone. I am using computer to do homework in the public library.This computer is a bit slow so I am irritated a bit. A social network service is an online service or site. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Wee!

Thanks for doing your homework ^^

I hope you are having a great night.

I like to use phone to talk someone.
>> I like using my phone to talk to someone.

I also use phone to watch messages.
>> I also use my phone to check my messages.

Social networking is more work well in the phone.
>> Social networking applications work well on the phone.

I am using computer to do homework in the public library.

>> I use my computer on doing my homework in the public library.

This computer is a bit slow so I am irritated a bit.
>> My computer is a bit slow and it makes me a bit irritated.

A social network service is an online service or site.
>> Social network service is a kind of online service.

Thanks for reading.
Bye.

>> CORRECT

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