Sokcho Vacation
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My favorite vacation was Sokcho. My mother, my father, my sister, and I went to Sokcho in vacation. I arrived at Sokcho for 6hours. We slept first, and I get up early. My mother, my father, and I saw a beautiful sea. It was sparkling. This was very exicting vacation.
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My favorite vacation was Sokcho.
>> My favorite vacation was in Sokcho.
My mother, my father, my sister, and I went to Sokcho in vacation.
>> My mother, father, sister, and I went to Sokcho on vacation.
OR>> My family and I went to Sokcho on vacation.
I arrived at Sokcho for 6hours.
>> I arrived at Sokcho after six hours.
OR>> >> I arrived at Sokcho in six hours.
We slept first, and I get up early.
>> We slept first, and I got up early.
My mother, my father, and I saw a beautiful sea.
>> My mother, father, and I saw a beautiful sea.
OR>> My parents and I saw a beautiful sea.
It was sparkling.
>> CORRECT!
This was very exicting vacation.
>> This was a very exciting vacation.
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