solutions to adapting in new places

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Thank you for submitting your composition. It was excellently done. Are you planning to live in another city or maybe live abroad? If given a chance, where would you like to live and work? Tell me on our next class. Happy New Year!

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There is no doubt that the number of people who moves to new cities or countries has increased.

>>There is no doubt that the number of people who move to new cities or countries has increased. 

I believe modern techniques have made it possible.

>> I believe modern technologies have made it possible.

There are many reasons; for instance, outside work, business trip, changing jobs, entering university and etc.

>> There are many reasons for moving; for instance outside work, business trips, changing jobs, entering a university and others.

OR>> There are several reasons for moving. For instance work, a business trip, changing jobs, entering a university, etc.

However, leaving home is necessarily followed by social, realistic difficulties.

>> correct!

OR>> However, leaving home is accompanied by social, realistic difficulties.
There is a substantive problem like using public transportation.

>> correct!

The solution to ease is preparing it in advance by using internet or application.

>> The solution to this is preparing  in advance by using the internet or an application.

In addition to this situation, if someone bump into problems in life, he or she can ask to other people and also, they can find many information on the paper or internet.

>> In addition to this situation, if someone bumps into problems in life, he or she can ask other people for help or one can find many information on the paper or the internet. 
 Secondly, the emotional and social problems can be exist.

>> Secondly, emotional and social problems can exist.

When people moves to the new cities and countries, a loneliness is an unavoidable feeling.

>> When people move to new cities and countries,  loneliness is an unavoidable feeling.

Despite the situation, there are many ways to alleviate it like hobby clubs, gyms, foreign people associations; and activities made by the cities.

>> Despite this, there are many ways to alleviate it like joining hobby clubs, gyms, foreign people associations and activities made available in the city.