Som sns ban posting health posts.
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Pinterest offers redirect links to official health care sites such as who when people search images about vaccine.
As lots of sns worry about misunderstanings on vaccine, they use their own policies on those posts.
For example, facebook removes ads if the posting is about unvaccinated things.
There are so many fake informations in sns, so people would have one look and belive it without proves.
Supporting unvaccinating is that kind of thing.
Even though many authorized professionals assert vaccine is essential, they stick to their position to anti vaccine.
It is dangerous because it can affect on herd immunity harmfully.
So their behavior makes not only their own kids but other kids risky.
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Pinterest offers redirect links to official health care sites such as WHO when people search for images about vaccine.
>>Pinterest offers redirect links to official health care sites such as who when people search images about vaccine.
As lots of sns worry about misunderstanings on vaccine, they use their own policies on those posts.
As lots of sns worry about misunderstanings on vaccine, they use their own policies on those posts.
>>As lots of SNS worry about misinformation on vaccine, they use their own policies on their posts.
For example, facebook removes ads if the posting is about unvaccinated things.
For example, facebook removes ads if the posting is about unvaccinated things.
>>For example, Facebook removes ads if the posting is about unvaccinated people.
There are so many fake informations in sns, so people would have one look and belive it without proves.
There are so many fake informations in sns, so people would have one look and belive it without proves.
>>There are so many fake information on SNS, people would have one look and believe it without proof.
Supporting unvaccinating is that kind of thing.
Supporting unvaccinating is that kind of thing.
>>Supporting non-vaccination is that kind of thing.
Even though many authorized professionals assert vaccine is essential, they stick to their position to anti vaccine.
>>Even though many authorized professionals assert vaccine is essential, they stick to their anti vaccine position.
It is dangerous because it can affect on herd immunity harmfully.
>>It is dangerous because it can harmfully affect herd immunity.
So their behavior makes not only their own kids but other kids risky.
>>So, their behavior makes not only their own kids but other kids at risk.
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