Some advantages and disadvantages of the free Wi-Fi
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Topic : Can you think of some advantages and disadvantages of the free Wi-Fi access in your country
Korea is famous for fast internet. So, we can connect the free Wi-Fi anywhere like cafe, restaurant even bus station.
It is very useful when we don\'t have data. We can search anything like map, restaurant, and so on.
But, sometimes the free Wi-Fi have disadvantages.
We naturally find the free Wi-Fi where we go. If there is not, we will feel very inconvenient.
Also, we want to talk each other but because of the free Wi-Fi, we watch the phone.
However, I already get used to the free Wi-Fi. So, I feel advantages of them than disadvantages.
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Hi Se [이름]!
Here are the corrections.
Korea is famous for fast internet. So, we can connect the free Wi-Fi anywhere like cafe, restaurant even bus station.
>>Korea is famous for fast internet. So, we can connect free Wi-Fi anywhere like cafes, restaurants, and even in bus stations.
It is very useful when we don\'t have data. We can search anything like map, restaurant, and so on.
>>Correct!
But, sometimes the free Wi-Fi have disadvantages. We naturally find the free Wi-Fi where we go. If there is not, we will feel very inconvenient.
>>But, sometimes, free Wi-Fi have disadvantages. We naturally find free Wi-Fi wherever we go. If there is not, we will feel very inconvenient.
Also, we want to talk each other but because of the free Wi-Fi, we watch the phone.
>>Also, we want to talk to each other, but because of the free Wi-Fi, we just watch in the phone.
However, I already get used to the free Wi-Fi. So, I feel advantages of them than disadvantages.
>>However, I already get used to free Wi-Fi. So, I feel the advantages of them than disadvantages.
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