some advices on how to live a healthy lifestyle

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When I was a kndrgarten student, my mom took me to a butcher shop , where I watched pigs and cows\' dead bodies such as their tounges, legs, tails and their organs ,etc. 

>>>When I was a kindergarten student, my mom took me to a butcher shop and I saw parts of pigs and cows such as  tongues, legs, tails and other organs. 

They were such shocking scenes.

>>>It was such shocking scenes.

Since then, I couldn\'t eat and smell meat\'s cooking odor at a dining table.

>>>Since then, I couldn\'t stand the smell and eat meat at a dining table.

Even when I passed by (in front of???????) barbecue restaurants, I used to hold my breath. 

>>>I even hold my breath when I passed in front of barbecue restaurants. 

That\'s why I can have a baby face. 

>>>That\'s why I have a baby face now. 

Since I was an elementay school student, I had been so eagar to be a ballerina in the future that, before I went to bed, I did stretching vey hard to have my body flexible every night.

>>>Since I was an elementary school student, I had been so eager to be a ballerina in the future that, before I went to bed, I used to stretch every night that\'s why my body is flexible. 

When I eat bad quality food like greasy, junk or fatty food , I get some pimples on my face easily or my facial complexion isn\'t good. 

>>>Eating junk food or fatty food gives me pimples easily and makes my facial complexion bad. 

which helps me be able to be on a diet. 

>>>It also helped me to be on a diet.