Some animals shed their fur or making other kinds of mess. How can a pet owner keep their house clea
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My kitten isn\'t shedding fur yet, but it will soon.
But he is always making my room really messy. So, I have to clean my room to use the vacuum twice a day.
If he grows up more than currently, I will use \"a pet hair roller\" every day.
Plus, I will open the window for 10minutes to air out the room.
( And I would like to get any better ideas from you, haha)
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Hi, Ella!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! Your answers are on point. :)
~ T. Camille
My kitten isn\'t shedding fur yet, but it will soon.
>> CORRECT!
But he is always making my room really messy.
>> CORRECT!
So, I have to clean my room to use the vacuum twice a day.
>> So, I have to clean my room by using the vacuum twice a day.
If he grows up more than currently, I will use \"a pet hair roller\" every day.
>> CORRECT!
Plus, I will open the window for 10 minutes to air out the room.>> CORRECT!
OR >> Plus, I will open the window for 10 minutes for ventilation.
( And I would like to get any better ideas from you, haha)(I would love to share some ideas! Let\'s talk about it later on HAHA! ^^)
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