Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this? Sh
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Being able to speak persuasively is vital skills not just for politicians, teachers and business leaders. It is important for everyone because most people are living in the democratic countries which are operated based on the public consensus. To participate discussion, people have to be trained communication skills. In the business parts, workers are required to persuade business partners. If they didn\'t be taught these skills at school, they might encounter difficulties in various situations such as business meeting and conferences. Although, students have enormous subjects to study, presentation skill has to be the first thing which pupils have to learn. I believe children have much more neural plasticity to learn new and different facts compare to adults. As I explained above, people are asked to persuade someone or to deliver presentation in public regardless of personal ability. If they are trained in the early stage of the life, it would be much easier to participate meetings a
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Being able to speak persuasively is a vital skill not just for politicians, teachers and business leaders.
>>> CORRECT
It is important for everyone because most people are living in the democratic countries which are operated based on the public consensus.
>>> CORRECT
To participate discussion, people have to be trained communication skills.
>>> To participate in the discussion, people have to be trained in communication skills.
In the business parts, workers are required to persuade business partners.
>>> In business, workers are required to persuade business partners.
If they didn\'t be taught these skills at school, they might encounter difficulties in various situations such as business meeting and conferences.
>>> If they aren\'t taught of these skills at school, they might encounter difficulties in various situations such as business meetings and conferences.
Although, students have enormous subjects to study, presentation skill has to be the first thing which pupils have to learn.
>>> CORRECT
I believe children have much more neural plasticity to learn new and different facts compare to adults.
>>> CORRECT
As I explained above, people are asked to persuade someone or to deliver presentation in public regardless of personal ability.
>>> CORRECT
If they are trained in the early stage of life, it would be much easier to participate in meetings...
>>> CORRECT
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