Some companies require their employees to wear uniform What do you think about this?
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I think it violates employees freedom.Employees have rights to wear the clothes that they want. But it is rude to wear crazy clothes like a swim suit or Halloween costume. And there are some problems of wearing uniforms. Employees usually go to restaurants after the work. They usually eat meat such as beef or pork. The smell of the food will permeate in their cloth. I think it violate employees freedom but they musn not have to wear strange clothes.
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I think it violates employees freedom.
>>> I think it violates employees\' freedom.
Employees have rights to wear the clothes that they want.
>>> Correct!
But it is rude to wear crazy clothes like a swim suit or Halloween costume.
>> But it is rude to wear crazy clothes like a swimsuit or Halloween costumes.
And there are some problems of wearing uniforms.
>>> Correct!
Employees usually go to restaurants after the work.
>>> Correct!
They usually eat meat such as beef or pork.
>>> Correct!
The smell of the food will permeate in their cloth
>>> Correct!
I think it violate employees freedom but they musn not have to wear strange clothes.
>>> I think it violates employees\' freedom but they must not have to wear strange clothes.
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