Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while
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Sponsoring is a good way to advertise themselves to crowd.
In case of my institute, the public relations team used to advertise about our education policy, stream of the 4th industrial revolution and promotion of the other institutes through utilizing some tools and advertisement.
Because It makes to improve reputation of our institute and have an opportunity to inform specific information to those who don’t know about our institute before.
Also, It is more effective way rather than direct publicity through commercial advertisement.
Because indirect advertisement means that it puts into ordinary people’s like and affects their life style so that they can feel it naturally without any repulsion like Cocacola, Samsung and Apple.
Of course, there are also disadvantages to this. People who don’t want to see contents and a logo about particular company might be feeling unpleasant.
Also, there may no profits and outstanding consume as much as investment about sponsor in company.
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Hello [이름]!
Having this kind of score is very good. I\'m so proud if you. See you later.
Teacher Travis.
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In case of my institute, the public relations team used to advertise about our education policy, stream of the 4th industrial revolution and promotion of the other institutes through utilizing some tools and advertisement.
>>In the case of my institute, public relations team used to advertise about our education policy, stream of the 4th industrial revolution and promotion of the other institute through utilizing some tools and advertisement.
Because It makes to improve reputation of our institute and have an opportunity to inform specific information to those who don’t know about our institute before.
>>Correct.
Also, It is more effective way rather than direct publicity through commercial advertisement.
>>Correct.
Because indirect advertisement means that it puts into ordinary people’s like and affects their life style so that they can feel it naturally without any repulsion like Cocacola, Samsung and Apple.
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Of course, there are also disadvantages to this. People who don’t want to see contents and a logo about particular company might be feeling unpleasant.
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Also, there may no profits and outstanding consume as much as investment about sponsor in company.
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