Some companies use a flexible time schedule and employees can work hours that suit their lifestyles.
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Hi, Diego!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. CamilleI highly agree with the company’s decision that
employees can work hours that suit their lifestyles.
>> CORRECT!However, I believe there
are some conditions that must be followed.
>> CORRECT!
I’ve been working in a manufacturing company
that produces various kinds of semiconductor products.
>> CORRECT!The typical feature of a
manufacturing industry is ‘you never work alone’.
>> CORRECT!There are processes that are
necessary to make a product.
>> CORRECT!It is connected organically.
>> CORRECT!It is important to
follow the timeline so that semi-finished products keep on track.
>> It is important to follow the timeline so that semi-finished products would be kept on track.
As I mentioned, if employees want to work hours
that suit their lifestyles, the company’s work should not be connected
strongly, rather be kind of task easily separated.
>> As I mentioned, if employees want to work hours that suit their lifestyles, the company’s work should not be connected strongly, rather it should be a kind of task that\'s easily separated.
So, one’s absence does not interfere
with whole procedures.
>> CORRECT!
I
believe this is the reason why only a specific industry can provide employees
with a kind of benefit. Such as financial services, programming industries etc.
>> I believe this is the reason why only a specific industry can provide employees with a kind of benefit such as financial services, programming industries, etc.
The benefits of employees choosing their
working hours are based on respecting personal differences.
>> CORRECT!
So, I believe it
will increase personal productivity.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you asking me this nice question!
Have nice weekends!
Have nice weekends!
[No worries! It\'s actually fun reading your answers that are actually on point. :) Thank you for sharing your thoughts! :) ~ T. Camille]
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