Some companies use a flexible time system, so employees can work on hours that suit their lifestyles
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You handed in a an accurate issue about this topic, Sir [이름]!
Companies have their own ways to cut their expenses for the salary of their employees using this system. But when we look at the brighter side, it\'s vey helpful for us to work on our most convenient time. This is great! See you!
~Teacher Eunice
I think this is the incredible idea because some would like to work the time that suit their life style.
>>> I think this is an incredible idea because some would like to work on the time that suit their lifestyle.
If they have a child, they would send their child to the school before going to work.
>>> If they have a child, they would send their child to school before going to work.
Somebody doesn\'t like waking up early, so he/she wants to get the job which meet their preference.
>>> Somebody doesn\'t like waking up early, so he/she wants to get a job which meets their preferences.
Although, There are advantages on the flexible time system, The company might misuse this system.
>>> Although, there are advantages on the flexible time system, there\'s a big chance that the company might misuse this system.
If there is nothing to do because they just need few people to do work, they might ask employee to take a rest.
>>> If there is nothing to do because they just need a few people to do the work, they might ask employees to take a rest.
It occurs reducing employee\'s salary.
>>> Reducing of employees\' salary will occur too.
On the other hand, if company has a lot of things to do, they might ask employee to do overtime.
>>> On the other hand, if company has a lot of things to do, they might ask their employees to do overtime.
This means that people must work when company ask they to work, if not,they might be penalized or get a low score of their performance.
>>> This means that people must work when the company asks them, if not, they might be penalized, or get a low score for their performance.
I think this system must apply for the people who need it sincerely.
>>> I think this system must be applied for the people who need it sincerely.
If not, we are facing the adverse reaction.
>>> If not, we will be facing the adverse reaction.
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