Some countries put a high tax on tobacco products to discourage smoking. Do you think this is fair t
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I think it is unfair.
>>> correct
, they should prohibit selling tobacco before they collect tax.
>>> They should prohibit selling tobacco before they collect tax.
There are some research that prove the countries\' illogical behavior.
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It is to take more tax and to get more vote from tobacco company.
>>> It is to take more tax and to get more votes from tobacco companies.
It is easier to get more benefit than pay attention to improve the health insurance.
>>> It is easier to get more benefits than pay attention to improve people\'s health insurance.
I suggest them, \" Prohibit or Permit!\"
>>> My suggestion is to prohibit it or just totally permit it.
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