Some countries put a high tax on tobacco products to discourage smoking. Do you think this is fair t

2019-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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I think it is unfair. The governments say that it is to discourage smoking and to protect the health of nation, but it doesn\'t make sense. If they take this important, they should prohibit selling tobacco before they collect tax. There are some research that prove the countries\' illogical behavior. It is to take more tax and to get more vote from tobacco company. It is easier to get more benefit than pay attention to improve the health insurance. I suggest them, \" Prohibit or Permit!\"

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Hi Su ^y^


Thank you for doing your homework :)

Great work :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><



I think it is unfair.

>>> correct


, they should prohibit selling tobacco before they collect tax.

>>> They should prohibit selling tobacco before they collect tax.


There are some research that prove the countries\' illogical behavior.

>>> correct


 It is to take more tax and to get more vote from tobacco company.

>>> It is to take more tax and to get more votes from tobacco companies.


It is easier to get more benefit than pay attention to improve the health insurance.

>>> It is easier to get more benefits than pay attention to improve people\'s health insurance.


I suggest them, \" Prohibit or Permit!\"

>>> My suggestion is to prohibit it or just totally permit it.

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