Some facts about Lunar New Year
학생이 쓴 원문
Lunar New Year is the holiday that are enjoyed with all family.
It has been a long tradition and started from long time ago.
As all people eat rice cake soup, getting a year older at last.
Young children politely bow down grandparents and get some pocket money.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna! I appreciate your time and effort in sharing some facts about Lunar New Year. I hope you enjoy the Lunar New Year this year with your family. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you. Keep safe and warm!~ T. Lyn
Lunar New Year is the holiday that are enjoyed with all family.
>>Lunar New Year is a holiday enjoyed by the whoe family.
It has been a long tradition and started from long time ago.
It has been a long tradition and started from long time ago.
>>It has been a long tradition and started a long time ago.
As all people eat rice cake soup, getting a year older at last.
As all people eat rice cake soup, getting a year older at last.
>>Just like everyone eat rice cake soup, they finally get older.
Young children politely bow down grandparents and get some pocket money.
Young children politely bow down grandparents and get some pocket money.
>>Young children bow respectfully to their grandparents and receive pocket money.
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