Some features which make me comfortable
학생이 쓴 원문
First, l can see outside in my bedroom and living room through big windows. The house has a good commands because there are a mountain and a long walking trail to a big lake. With nature near my house, I feel healed. Second, the new house is a little bigger than my former one, so it feels very open. Third, each room is located in a little bit distance, so we can have privacy and take a rest without any distractions. Lastly, our neighborhoods is very quiet and peaceful, and
I can feel relaxed.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Your place really sounds wonderful and relaxing based on how you describe it. It sounds like the complete opposite of the feeling of living in the city. May your new house bring you warmth, comfort, endless joy, and good memories!
- T. Caitlyn
First, l can see outside in my bedroom and living room through big windows.
>> First, I can see outside from my bedroom and living room through big windows.
The house has a good commands because there are a mountain and a long walking trail to a big lake.
>> The house has a good view because there is a mountain and a long walking trail to a big lake.
With nature near my house, I feel healed.
>> CORRECT
Second, the new house is a little bigger than my former one, so it feels very open.
>> CORRECT
Third, each room is located in a little bit distance, so we can have privacy and take a rest without any distractions.
>> Third, each room is located a little farther apart, so we can have privacy and rest without any distractions.
Lastly, our neighborhoods is very quiet and peaceful, and I can feel relaxed.
>> Lastly, our neighborhood is very quiet and peaceful, and I feel relaxed.
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