Some friends you met on a trip want you to visit their country. You don\'t know much about the count
학생이 쓴 원문
I think I will go their country, even if there is risk involved.
It can be new experience and I love to know the world I never met before.
Regardless of how much I know, I can aware their culture step by step.
I also care of danger, I need to be safe when I visit country I go first.
However, My appetite of meeting new world is more bigger than being safe.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
I love the ideas you have.
You know how to prioritize the reasons that you would include in your answer.
We just need to focus on vocabulary and sentence construction now.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think I will go their country, even if there is risk involved.
>> I think I will go to their country, even if there is risk involved.
It can be new experience and I love to know the world I never met before.
It can be new experience and I love to know the world I never met before.
>> It can be a new experience and I love to learn about a world that I\'ve never known.
Regardless of how much I know, I can aware their culture step by step.
Regardless of how much I know, I can aware their culture step by step.
>> Regardless of how much I know, I can learn about their culture step by step.
I also care of danger, I need to be safe when I visit country I go first.
I also care of danger, I need to be safe when I visit country I go first.
>> I also worry about danger, so I need to be safe when I visit a country for the first time.
However, My appetite of meeting new world is more bigger than being safe.
However, My appetite of meeting new world is more bigger than being safe.
>> However, my desire to explore new cultures is greater than my concern for safety.
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