Some guy

2011-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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There is a guy who gets offended very easily by little things in our department. He likes to complain about everything. Most of his complaints are related to our company. like low salary,his failure to promote and so on. Since I get annoyed when I talk to him, I try to avoid meeting him. I am optimistic person. and I also believe in the power of positiveness

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Wow [이름], I cant say anything about your writing skill.. Its really impressive, keep up the good work! Its really nice that you are always positive, thats a way to achieving your goal! Talk to you again later my dear..:) T.Camille  There is a guy who gets offended very easily by little things in our department.>.correctHe likes to complain about everything.>>correct!Most of his complaints are related to our company.>.correct!like low salary,his failure to promote and so on.>>correctSince I get annoyed when I talk to him, I try to avoid meeting him.>>correct!I am optimistic person. and I also believe in the power of positiveness >>correct!

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