Some Messages That I Want to Give to Infectees

2020-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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First of all, if you get affected through your fault, this accident will be enough to give you a lesson to live with a strong sense of community. The majority of people have been trying to follow the rules of health since it has been the only way that can lower the possibility of spread. Therefore, if you hadn\'t followed the rules of health and became an infected person, it is retributive justice. Please consider others. However, whether you get affected through your fault or not, I would like to console you. I understand how you are anxious about the dangerousness of coronavirus and how much you are troubled with pain. There are lots of skillful medical teams and appliances that can help you to heal completely. Moreover, we already know that many patients tested negative finally. Thus, don\'t be afraid and try to ease your mind. You will be the guy who will be tested negative someday soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Su [이름]. ^^

Thank you for making your homework. 
You did really well! 
I know 10,000 letters are not enough, but you did well in sharing your thoughts. ^^


~t. Ally


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First of all, if you get affected through your fault, this accident will be enough to give you a lesson to live with a strong sense of community. 
>> CORRECT!

The majority of people have been trying to follow the rules of health since it has been the only way that can lower the possibility of spread. 
>> The majority of people have been trying to follow the rules of health since it has been the only way that can lower the possibility of spreading the virus. 

Therefore, if you hadn\'t followed the rules of health and became an infected person, it is retributive justice. 
>> CORRECT!
 
Please consider others. However, whether you get affected through your fault or not, I would like to console you. 
>> CORRECT!

I understand how you are anxious about the dangerousness of coronavirus and how much you are troubled with pain. 
>> I understand how you are anxious about the dangerousness of the coronavirus and how much you are troubled with pain. 

There are lots of skillful medical teams and appliances that can help you to heal completely. 
>> There are lots of skillful medical teams and facilities that can help you to heal completely. 

Moreover, we already know that many patients tested negative finally. 
>> CORRECT!

Thus, don\'t be afraid and try to ease your mind. You will be the guy who will be tested negative someday soon.
>> CORRECT!

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