Some miscommunication~ and homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Aimee
During today lession, We had some miscommunication.
3.I already take the lion share over the food.
-> I said that "I always take the~"
>> I have already taken the lion share of the food.
5. I see fulity of live because the time is so fast paced.
-> I said that "I feel the futility of life because ~
>> I want to live my life to the fullest because the time is so fast paced.
Homework
If you could change one thing about the world what would it be?
- I want to change the language. All world people use just one language, especially Korean. So,I don't need to study English or another language to get competitiveness any more. Just the thought of it is making me happy.
Have a good day!
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Awwww. Sorry for the miscommunication.
I think the background noise has something to do with it but don\'t worry,
I will be more attentive tomorrow.
Anyways with your corrections, FUTILITY means uselessness, so do mean that
life is becoming useless because time is so fast paced? Am I right?
Please check what I wrote and send me a message if I got your idea right.
Thank you for sending me this message today.
See you tomorrow.
Always,
~T. Aimee^^
Hi, Aimee
>> CorrectDuring today lession, We had some miscommunication.>> We had a miscommunication with today\'s lesson.3.I already take the lion share over the food.-> I said that \"I always take the~\"
>> I always take the lion\'s share of the food. >> I have already taken the lion share of the food.>> Correct5. I see fulity of live because the time is so fast paced.-> I said that \"I feel the futility of life because ~>> I feel the futility of life because the time is so fast paced.
>> I think that life is useless because time is so fast paced.>> I want to live my life to the fullest because the time is so fast paced.>> CorrectHomeworkIf you could change one thing about the world what would it be?
>> Correct- I want to change the language.
>> Correct
>> I want to change the world\'s language.
All world people use just one language, especially Korean.
>> All the people around should have one language, especially Korean.
So,I don\'t need to study English or another language to get competitiveness any more.
>> So that I don\'t need to study English or another language to be competitive.
Just the thought of it is making me happy.>> Correct
>> Just the thinking about it makes me happy.Have a good day!
>> Correct
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