Some new sports are called \'extreme sports\'. What are some extreme sports? Have you tried any of t
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As science and economic are getting developed, as sports are getting diverse.
Extreme sports came from this phenomenon.
What I know one of extreme sports is a wing-suit.
This sport is that a player who wears wing-suit jumps from a cliff and flies in the air without any ropes.
I haven\'t tried this sport and never thought this.
Because as we know, my life is just one and I want to live long.
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Hi Ian!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! Extreme sports are fun for others but they still have to be really careful in doing such activities.
-T. Caitlyn
As science and economic are getting developed, as sports are getting diverse.
>> As science and the economy develops, sports are getting diverse.
Extreme sports came from this phenomenon.
Extreme sports came from this phenomenon.
>> These factors triggered the creation of extreme sports.
What I know one of extreme sports is a wing-suit.
What I know one of extreme sports is a wing-suit.
>> An example of extreme sport that I know is called wingsuit flying or wingsuiting.
This sport is that a player who wears wing-suit jumps from a cliff and flies in the air without any ropes.
This sport is that a player who wears wing-suit jumps from a cliff and flies in the air without any ropes.
>> In this sport, one uses a wingsuit and jumps from a cliff, and glides in the air.
I haven\'t tried this sport and never thought this.
I haven\'t tried this sport and never thought this.
>> I haven\'t tried this sport and never thought of this.
Because as we know, my life is just one and I want to live long.
Because as we know, my life is just one and I want to live long.
>> Because as we know, we only live once and I want to live long.
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