Some parents want their children to have the best of everything. As a parent, would you try to give

2022-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I don\'t think so. If I could afford to give my children luxurious or expensive things, I wouldn’t buy them expensive things because I want my children to know deficiency and lack of something which keeps us doing our best during our lives. I hope my children can be better off without my support and stand on their feet. I don’t want to spoon-feed them after they’re grown up. However, I don\'t’ spare anything to grow them in education, or a tour that extends their experience. Therefore, I will give them high-quality things to grow them mentally, and spiritually.

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Hello, Steve! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I don\'t think so. If I could afford to give my children luxurious or expensive things, I wouldn’t buy them expensive things because I want my children to know deficiency and lack of something which keeps us doing our best during our lives. 
>>> I don\'t think so. If I could afford to give my children luxurious or expensive things, I wouldn’t buy them costly items because I want my children to know deficiency and lack of something which keeps us doing our best during our lives. 

I hope my children can be better off without my support and stand on their feet.
>>> CORRECT!

I don’t want to spoon-feed them after they’re grown up. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, I don\'t’ spare anything to grow them in education, or a tour that extends their experience. 
>>> CORRECT!

Therefore, I will give them high-quality things to grow them mentally, and spiritually.
>>> CORRECT!

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