Some parents want their children to have the best of everything. As a parent, would you try to give
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I don\'t think so. If I could afford to give my children luxurious or expensive things, I wouldn’t buy them expensive things because I want my children to know deficiency and lack of something which keeps us doing our best during our lives. I hope my children can be better off without my support and stand on their feet. I don’t want to spoon-feed them after they’re grown up. However, I don\'t’ spare anything to grow them in education, or a tour that extends their experience. Therefore, I will give them high-quality things to grow them mentally, and spiritually.
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Hello, Steve! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I don\'t think so. If I could afford to give my children luxurious or expensive things, I wouldn’t buy them expensive things because I want my children to know deficiency and lack of something which keeps us doing our best during our lives.
>>> I don\'t think so. If I could afford to give my children luxurious or expensive things, I wouldn’t buy them costly items because I want my children to know deficiency and lack of something which keeps us doing our best during our lives.
I hope my children can be better off without my support and stand on their feet.
>>> CORRECT!
I don’t want to spoon-feed them after they’re grown up.
>>> CORRECT!
However, I don\'t’ spare anything to grow them in education, or a tour that extends their experience.
>>> CORRECT!
Therefore, I will give them high-quality things to grow them mentally, and spiritually.
>>> CORRECT!
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