Some people argue that the fittest, strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success
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To become sports players, they puts a lot of efforts since they were juniors. We think that efforts will never betray you. I believe that putting painful efforts always give sweet results. Athletes should train physically as well as mental parts because they can\'t show all their performance at once without mental training. However, I think physical training is more important than mental training because sports players can\'t get good results without strong body and skills in each sports. If it is big match in Olympics or World cup, I think that mental attitude is more important part than physical status. So, to achieve the greatest success, people have to train both parts.
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Good day Mr. [이름] ~! Thanks for doing your homework! Keep it up! Happy Monday.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
To become sports players, they puts a lot of efforts since they were juniors.
>>> To become athletes, they put a lot of efforts since they were juniors.
We think that efforts will never betray us.
>>> CORRECT
I believe that putting painful efforts always give sweet results.
>>> CORRECT
Athletes should train physically as well as mental parts because they can\'t show all their performance at once without mental training.
>>> Athletes should be trained physically as well as mentally because they can\'t show all their performance at once without mental training.
However, I think physical training is more important than mental because sports players can\'t get good results without strong body and skills in every sports.
>>> CORRECT
If it is big match in Olympics or World cup, I think that mental attitude is more important part than physical status.
>>> CORRECT
So, to achieve the greatest success, people have to train both parts.
>>> CORRECT
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