Some people believe football is a matter of life and death…
학생이 쓴 원문
It is true that some people think soccer like their life. And some games which they should fight to their own rivals are intense than ever. But just like what Bill Shankly the word he said \"Some people believe football is a matter of life and death…I can assure you it is much, much more important than that\". We should consider more important thing in our lives. I heard that some people who lives in England waste their time at pub watching and bet their money at the game. These kinds of action gives the crediblity to what he said. We should thing in more wider range. My life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for today’s homework!
You\'re right! We should broaden our minds on different matters in life.
Have a great day ahead
Teacher James
>>> CORRECT
And some games which they should fight to their own rivals are intense than ever.
>>> CORRECT
But just like what Bill Shankly the word he said \"Some people believe football is a matter of life and death…
>>> But just like Bill Shankly the word he said \"Some people believe football is a matter of life and death…
I can assure you it is much, much more important than that\".
>>> I can assure you that their is much more important than that\".
We should consider more important thing in our lives.
>>> We should consider the more important things in our lives.
I heard that some people who lives in England waste their time at pub watching and bet their money at the game.
>>> I heard that some people who live in England waste their time at a pub watching and bet their money at the game.
These kinds of action gives the crediblity to what he said. We should thing in more wider range.
>>> These kinds of actions give credibility to what he said. We should think in more wider range.
My life.
>>> CORRECT
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