Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that t
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Doing homework regularly gives us a lot of advantages to improve how to solve any problem such as writing homework of the Power English.
Compared with the first homework that I wrote down before, Vocabulary, grammar and overall sentence structures are getting better.
Having homework is one of important elements just in case I choose English class to study hard.
So I think that doing homework everyday is quite helpful to children who need to acquire particular knowledges concentrately.
On the other hand, too much homework makes learners more stressful and exhausted. If it is continued they will not interested in studying anymore.
because they are children that haven’t their own will to learn.
Therefore, giving appropriate mounts of homework and controlling the level will be sustainable way to be successful at school as well as living social life.
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Hello [이름]!
It\'s true, I still remember the days when you are making your first homework. You really improved well.
Teacher Travis.
>>Correct
>>OR: Doing homework regularly gives us a lot of advantages to improve how to solve any problem such as writing homework of Power English.
Compared with the first homework that I wrote down before, Vocabulary, grammar and overall sentence structures are getting better.
>>Correct.
Having homework is one of important elements just in case I choose English class to study hard.
>>Correct.
So I think that doing homework everyday is quite helpful to children who need to acquire particular knowledges concentrately.
>>So I think that doing homework everyday is quite helpful to children who needs to acquire particular knowledge.
On the other hand, too much homework makes learners more stressful and exhausted. If it is continued they will not interested in studying anymore.
>>On the other hand, having too much homework makes students to feel stress and exhaustion.
because they are children that haven’t their own will to learn.
>>OR: Doing homework regularly gives us a lot of advantages to improve how to solve any problem such as writing homework of Power English.
Compared with the first homework that I wrote down before, Vocabulary, grammar and overall sentence structures are getting better.
>>Correct.
Having homework is one of important elements just in case I choose English class to study hard.
>>Correct.
So I think that doing homework everyday is quite helpful to children who need to acquire particular knowledges concentrately.
>>So I think that doing homework everyday is quite helpful to children who needs to acquire particular knowledge.
On the other hand, too much homework makes learners more stressful and exhausted. If it is continued they will not interested in studying anymore.
>>On the other hand, having too much homework makes students to feel stress and exhaustion.
because they are children that haven’t their own will to learn.
>>Correct.
Therefore, giving appropriate mounts of homework and controlling the level will be sustainable way to be successful at school as well as living social life.
Therefore, giving appropriate mounts of homework and controlling the level will be sustainable way to be successful at school as well as living social life.
>>Correct.
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