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Amm...yeah. Young people can work faster than old people. Because their physical strength is better than old people. But old people have more career than young people. So, they can work more correctly.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Amm...yeah. Young people can work faster than old people.
>>> CORRECT
Because their physical strength is better than old people.
>>> CORRECT
But old people have more career than young people so, they can work more effectively.
>>> CORRECT
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