Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel th
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If the job that I have is the thing that I like and hope to be, there was no reason to change the jobs. But it is for keeping our lives, it is better to find an other jobs. However, it would not be easy to change job because most job-hunters have been encountered difficulties to get a job, even though they are eligible for any jobs enough. Students who just graduated a university have prepared a lot of things such as various licences, the score of foreign language tests and so on. But only few people are hired from the company. I would like to stress the truths about difficulty of getting a job. As a result, most people hesitate to get a new job which they would like to do. People have been dreaming of getting a jobs that are called high positions in society such as a doctor, a lawyer and so on. I mean people get a job in a difficult way so people don\'t want to change their job even if, it is not their dream job. But people are in success have told that if we want to be successful,
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
If the job that I have is the thing that I like and hope to be, there was no reason to change the jobs.
>>> If the job that I have is the thing I like and hoped to have, there was no reason for me to change my job.
But it is for keeping our lives, it is better to find an other jobs.
>>> But if it\'s for keeping our lives, it is better to find another jobs.
However, it would not be easy to change job because most job-hunters have been encountered difficulties to get a job, even though they are eligible for any jobs enough.
>>> However, it would not be easy to change a job because most job-hunters have encountered difficulties getting a job, even though they are eligible enough for some jobs.
Students who just graduated a university have prepared a lot of things such as various licences, the score of foreign language tests and so on.
>>>Students who just graduated from the university have prepared a lot of things such as various licenses, the score of foreign language tests and so on.
But only a few people are hired from the company.
>>> CORRECT
I would like to stress the truths about difficulty of getting a job.
I would like to stress the truth about the difficulties of getting a job.
As a result, most people hesitate to get a new job which they would like to do.
>>> CORRECT
People have been dreaming of getting a job that are called high positions in the society such as doctors, a lawyer and so on.
>>> CORRECT
I mean people get a job in a difficult way so people don\'t want to change their job even if, it is not their dream job.
>>> CORRECT
But people who succeeded have told that if we want to be successful,
>>> CORRECT
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