Some people believe that money is the most important factor for happiness, while others think that r

2026-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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If we live happily, I think relationships and health matter more than money. Money is necessary for people to live, of course. We can enjoy our hobbies and delicious food with money. We need money when we buy clothes and go to hospital. But if we earn money until the level to enjoy above things, money isn\'t a norm of happiness anymore. Some rich people confess that they suffer from depression even if they are rich. On the other hand, Relationships and health are related to happiness directly. Nobody lives without any relationships because people are sociable animals. Also, if someone become unhealthy, restriction will exist that make people unhappy. For example. he or she might not eat favorite food and do whatever he or she wants to do. In coclusion, we don\'t have to earn a lot of money to live happily, so it\'s better not to compare ourselves with rich people.

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