Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greate
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that all experience children have will help their emotional and social development. So professionals stress the importance of communication and having time with children from when they are born. Some people think that child can\'t remember what they experienced if they were young. However, I think they learned something while they went to somewhere with their family. Children can easily absorb what they see and feel, they also have good memory. I believe that they can remember every moments with their family. It will be great value for them when they grow up. Students in Korea are busy to attend school and private institute after they enter the elementary school. If we want them to be exposed various experience, we need to spend much time with them before they attend the school.
강사 첨삭
LOVELY TUESDAY MR. [이름]~! ^^ Thank you for diligently doing your homework! Keep it up! Have a nice day! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I believe that all experience children have will help their emotional and social development.
>>> I believe that all experiences children have will help their emotional and social development.
So professionals stress the importance of communication and having time with children from when they are born.
>>> So professionals stressed the importance of communication and having time with children from the time they are born.
Some people think that child can\'t remember what they experienced if they were young.
>>> Some people think that children couldn\'t remember what they experienced when they were young.
However, I think they learned something while they went to somewhere with their family.
>>> However, I think they learned something while they went somewhere with their family.
Children can easily absorb what they see and feel, they also have good memory.
>>> Children can easily absorb what they see and feel, they also have a good memory.
I believe that they can remember every moments with their family.
>>> CORRECT
It will be great value for them when they grow up.
>>> It will be a great value for them when they grow up.
Students in Korea are busy to attend school and private institute after they enter elementary school.
>>> CORRECT
If we want them to be exposed in various experiences, we need to spend much time with them before they attend school.
>>> CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.